Changes and Further Shooting - Pin Board

Today, we all met up to discuss what we are going to do to improve our title sequence, starting with the pin board footage. Lily and I focused on gathering more images of herself to pin onto the pin board so she will hopefully be perceived as the target this time. We had to re-arrange the layout of the pin board and get rid of some pictures that we already had on it. For example, we have gotten rid of the picture of just Katy by herself and we replaced it with a current picture of Lily. The close up shot that we had of Katy will now be replaced by Lily as this is was one of the main problems that we had to fix and it was part of our feedback that we received. We also thought of replacing our red arrows with white ones however Matt said it would not work as well due to it the scene being shot in a dark room with lighting placed directly at it, he said that the white would reflect and could possibly be washed out so we stuck with using red arrows on the pin board.
Here are some images of our storyboard and how we have developed it: